tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9014610743273803857.post4472907585327225464..comments2023-11-03T09:42:56.276-06:00Comments on The Blog That Helps You Diagnose Your Characters: The Dance of DeathAuthor Joshua Hoythttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01256754228034053632noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9014610743273803857.post-30014659730494281672011-04-19T12:33:29.895-06:002011-04-19T12:33:29.895-06:00Well done Josh. You have great imagery, it really ...Well done Josh. You have great imagery, it really brought the story to life for me!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18265935385617222160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9014610743273803857.post-218031629044044022011-04-18T07:53:17.245-06:002011-04-18T07:53:17.245-06:00Whoa. What a creepy ending! I love it :) Great job...Whoa. What a creepy ending! I love it :) Great job.RosieChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07911305246379355484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9014610743273803857.post-70466790449864663802011-04-16T19:39:04.723-06:002011-04-16T19:39:04.723-06:00Thanks everyone for the wonderful comments and tho...Thanks everyone for the wonderful comments and thoughts.Author Joshua Hoythttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01256754228034053632noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9014610743273803857.post-40240245738026077272011-04-16T12:36:59.243-06:002011-04-16T12:36:59.243-06:00Very Creative!! Absolutely loved this, my goodness...Very Creative!! Absolutely loved this, my goodness but your blog has exploded with greatness! I love it. Great story!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9014610743273803857.post-57655654282072093752011-04-16T11:18:35.276-06:002011-04-16T11:18:35.276-06:00Can't beleive I somehow missed coming by yeste...Can't beleive I somehow missed coming by yesterday. This was awesome, truly. Very unearthly feel and nicely executed. Good job.<br /><br />Thanks so much for taking part.Wendy Tyler Ryanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10841984342368861282noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9014610743273803857.post-52851156777930611692011-04-16T09:45:18.320-06:002011-04-16T09:45:18.320-06:00Nice job, creepy little grim reaper children!Nice job, creepy little grim reaper children!MJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04647627174443420783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9014610743273803857.post-13296819775160114712011-04-15T21:00:34.624-06:002011-04-15T21:00:34.624-06:00nice. i like the hint of supernatural, your descri...nice. i like the hint of supernatural, your descriptives are good...personally i think you would get more bang for your buck in the present tense vs. past but that is me..Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9014610743273803857.post-5118036698193871832011-04-15T19:45:20.934-06:002011-04-15T19:45:20.934-06:00Wow!!
You are superb buddy!!! The story is awesom...Wow!!<br /><br />You are superb buddy!!! The story is awesome!! Bony white finger, black dress, odd shapes!!! My goodness!! They all add enigma to the story!!<br /><br />with warm regards<br /><a href="http:becomingprince.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow"> CatchyTips for Writers </a>Abhishekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03633374524540097827noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9014610743273803857.post-63748072735999411142011-04-15T19:00:39.352-06:002011-04-15T19:00:39.352-06:00...her black dress flowing around her softly like ......her black dress flowing around her softly like smoke coming off an almost dead coal.<br /><br />That's my favorite part. Nice imagery. I felt like I was there with them.Valhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13025832536749983018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9014610743273803857.post-53679099679631070722011-04-15T18:32:09.568-06:002011-04-15T18:32:09.568-06:00So nice! I really enjoyed reading it. I'm kin...So nice! I really enjoyed reading it. I'm kinda a flash fiction buff.Rebecca Dupreehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08687364861479901764noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9014610743273803857.post-6530389291633860902011-04-15T17:15:22.087-06:002011-04-15T17:15:22.087-06:00The dance of death touched by the hands of childre...The dance of death touched by the hands of children. Dark,mystic and totally enjoyable to read.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04218651886143284455noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9014610743273803857.post-20726595959092326412011-04-15T16:22:31.844-06:002011-04-15T16:22:31.844-06:00oo..creepy. Nice atmosphere :)oo..creepy. Nice atmosphere :)Lynda R Young as Elle Cardyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09975442291393246148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9014610743273803857.post-1159408830593599822011-04-15T15:43:07.717-06:002011-04-15T15:43:07.717-06:00Dark and delightfully done. Nice use of the words ...Dark and delightfully done. Nice use of the words and great flow.Michael Di Gesuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17047267262428143113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9014610743273803857.post-5054453332598665352011-04-15T14:52:52.615-06:002011-04-15T14:52:52.615-06:00Very creepy mood and nice use of the required word...Very creepy mood and nice use of the required words, they looked daunting beforehand.aprilhoythttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05992485192426728917noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9014610743273803857.post-38716674134757683362011-04-15T13:07:16.840-06:002011-04-15T13:07:16.840-06:00Those children are wonderfully creepy.Those children are wonderfully creepy.Marsha A. Moorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18380081382159214513noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9014610743273803857.post-79794723556817026862011-04-15T12:48:15.152-06:002011-04-15T12:48:15.152-06:00Hi,
Oooh, I loved this. Great sense of the supern...Hi,<br /><br />Oooh, I loved this. Great sense of the supernatural, and children . . . Wow! ;)<br /><br />best<br />FFrancine Howarthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02326542867876257042noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9014610743273803857.post-32546334803621432802011-04-15T12:38:57.504-06:002011-04-15T12:38:57.504-06:00Wow. Nice job. I enjoyed reading it.Wow. Nice job. I enjoyed reading it.Emilyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13016973541553233943noreply@blogger.com