Yesterday (yes I know I missed it) The Golden Eagle hosted her 2 year blogoversary. The rules were to write a short story about an Evil Genius. Here is my story (Not edited or anything just for fun :)
Tim was no ordinary person. He watched from the
sidelines as others had fun. He was mischievous and conniving, making his mark
as often as he could and today was no different. His thumbs circled each other
as he studied the scene before him, head bent and lips turned up just a bit at the
tips. If one looked close enough it would almost seem that there was a glint or
spark in his eyes that appeared to dance and sway like a Tesla coil.
The time was quickly approaching in which his plan would
unfold. It would explode on the scene like a jack-in-the-box. Chaos would ensue
leaving only havoc and disarray spreading like a swarm of bees across the
concourse.
A small pop echoed between the buildings followed by a cloud
of smoke. A scream. A large woman billowed out of the door making a b-line for
Tim. Tim’s smile faded, the glint was gone and his thumbs no longer moved.
“It’s to the principal’s office for you young man.”
haha...so was it cherry bombs in the toilet...smiles...fun one sir
ReplyDeleteHa! I wasn't expecting that - very well done.
ReplyDeleteNice work!!
ReplyDeletethat was a great twist! :D
ReplyDeleteLoved the ending--didn't expect the principal's office to be the undoing of evil.
ReplyDeleteI liked the descriptions. You kept them fresh. Nice job.
ReplyDelete"a glint or spark in his eyes that appeared to dance and sway like a Tesla coil."
ReplyDeleteI love that description! Great blogfest entry. :)
That's okay about missing the date; voting's up until March 8 and I already added your blog to the list.
Okay, he cannot camp here!!
ReplyDeleteNice imagery! Love that twist. Well done. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks all for the comments. I'm glad the twist worked and it caught a few off guard :)
ReplyDeleteI certainly hope that is put in his permanent record. Just in case he tries to transfer to my district.
ReplyDeleteI love this, and a much more upbeat ending than expected :-)
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