Bio:
The Golden Eagle is a teenage student, dancer, musician, lover of books, nerd, and of course, a writer; her favorite genre to read and to write is SF, though she'll happily type away at other kinds of stories, too. You can find her at thegoldeneaglesblog.blogspot.com, where she blogs about writing and life in general.
Flash fiction:
The wind was blowing hard that day,
but the aero-racers didn’t care. If the breeze wanted to kick up a storm, then
it would.
Cynthia Harman strode
with confidence across the field, even though the mask she had to wear was
making her feel claustrophobic and the planet’s strange gases were turning
everything purple.
So what if it was her
first inter-space (she liked to think inter-galactic) competition? —She had the
sleekest, fastest flier and she’d been training her mind and her body for more
than a year and a half.
“Ready, ‘Thia?” Kelly
asked. She would be the one giving her information on her course throughout the
race; Cynthia trusted her completely and that had paid off, as time and time
again she’d come in first in smaller, planet-wide races.
Cynthia hoisted herself
up onto the Dragonfly, her craft, and activated her mike.
“Ready, Kel.”
“The race starts—“
But before her partner
could answer, headquarters signaled the racers.
“Racers: Wind speeds
are picking up and predicted to reach a maximum of 500 kmh. The judges have
convened and decided that continuing the aero-race would accompany excessive
risk—“
Before the man could
finish, Cynthia heard the boos of the other racers through the speaker in her
ear. She did not add her own. Instead, she nudged the Dragonfly close to the
launch point, hoping that the judges would take the contestants’ desire to race
anyway into account.
Shouts and arguments
echoed in her ear, until it was five minutes after the race had originally been
set to begin.
Then, finally—
“The judges have
reconsidered. Racers, if you would line up and prepare your craft.”
Having already done
that, and triple-checked the Dragonfly’s status, Cynthia grinned.
“Prepare for launch.
Before you leave, another warning—wind speeds have reached 420 kmh, and are
continuing their increase. Should a contestant wish to pull out, you need only
send up a flare, which shall be detected and relayed immediately to standby
personnel.
“And now, let the race
begin!”
A computer voice began
to number the seconds.
“Ten. Nine. Eight.”
Seven. Six. Five,
Cynthia thought.
“Four. Three. Two.”
“ONE!” she yelled, and
slammed down on the controls.
The Dragonfly took
off from the launch point and spiraled through the clouds below.
nice...would def like to read more...dfe impressed with you being a teenage writer...i used to write back then but let it go for about 15 years....so if it is a passion i def encourage you to keep after it...
ReplyDeleteThank you. And I do intend to keep writing. :)
DeleteApplause!
ReplyDeleteGreat little flash piece!
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you liked it. :)
DeleteI can never believe that GE is still a teenager. Great piece of fiction (as she always does). Well done!
ReplyDeleteIf only I could have written like you at your age. If only I could write as well as you now. I enjoyed your story and my only complaint is that it is so short.
ReplyDeleteI'm happy to hear you enjoyed it! Who knows, maybe it will end up as a novel . . . it happened with another flash fiction piece I wrote.
DeleteIt's wonderful to be on your blog! :)
ReplyDeleteLight years ahead of where I was as a writer at your age. You're probably even better than I am now!
ReplyDeleteGood piece, Golden. But now I want to know what happens to those flyers in the wind.
I doubt that. I haven't read CassaStar or CassaFire yet (though they're up on my TBR list, for sure!), but you write so well on your blog. :)
DeleteThank you! And I want to know, too.
Wow very impressive, especailly for a teenager, nicely done!
ReplyDeleteThanks! :)
DeleteGorgeous piece of flash fiction! I could honestly feel the anticipation in the countdown of those numbers.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad the tension came across in the piece!
DeleteHi Josh!! Thanks for hosting the amazing Golden Eagle! She's super duper talented and just wonderful!! Totally loved the action in her flash story here - I think I joined in with shouting "ONE!"
ReplyDelete:-)
Take care
x
LOL. I think I shouted it, too, while I was writing. :)
DeleteI would love to take a ride in the Dragonfly. Great job, Eagle!
ReplyDeleteThanks!
DeleteIf I ever run into Cynthia, I'll ask if you can hitch a ride. ;)
Awesome. So, did she win?
ReplyDeleteI don't know . . . but I might go back to this flash fiction in the future.
DeleteBeautiful piece of work! I loved it!
ReplyDeleteGreat flash fiction! Sounds like a fun race!
ReplyDeleteThanks. And yeah--I wouldn't mind participating in the race myself. :)
DeleteInteresting post & video. Flash fiction was excellent.
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteCool! Sounds like a fun event!
ReplyDeleteThanks. :)
DeleteYou wonder at what point does simulation become reality.
ReplyDeleteSim--now there's an idea. I had been thinking of the situation as physically on a planet, but it could be interpreted that way. :)
DeleteI'll add my voice to the chorus demanding more - but then I don't think I've ever read a flash fiction piece by Golden Eagle that I didn't want more of :-)
ReplyDeleteAw, thank you so much. :) If I ever continue this story, I'll let you all know!
DeleteWow, a teenager, really? I'm impressed. I loved this flash piece. I want to know if she wins. What will the wind do to her racer? Great job.
ReplyDeleteYup, teenager.
DeleteI'm wondering that, too. :)
Thanks!
Fantastic flash piece! I'm like Ciara - I want to know if she wins!
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteHope she wins!
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